Ravenkit/paw/wing

Name: Ravenkit/paw/wing
Gender: Male
Age: New born
Affiliate: Thunderclan
Rank: Kit

Looks: He is a totally black cat with red eyes.

Personality:
Ravenwing is a bit like a rogue (not the cat-rogue, but the
villian-rogue). He is very sneaky, quiet and fast. He kills his prey
before it even knows he was there. His slender body is a killing
mashine.
Birth: Ravenwing is the only child of Sandfur's second litter. He is the first cat born in the new territory and as such a blessing to the clan.

History: Sandfur will give birth to him without knowing she was even pregnant
(that happens!). Sandfur don't know who the father is, the kit just came
out and was there. She must have getten pregnant shortly before the
journey, maybe during one of the gatherings with an unknown cat? She
can't remember. Beside of that, everyone acts strange to him because he has red eyes. They act like he had some kind of sickness. But maybe one kit will not see his strangeness, maybe he will find one true friend.

Looks is too short.

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