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a new cat by dani :)

Post by ~dani-san~ on October 18th 2011, 1:05 pm

Name:Dawnpaw/storm


Gender: she cat


Age: 6 moons

Affiliate: Wind clan

Rank:Apprentice

Looks: a orange tabby with grey eyes (right eye blind)

Personality: dawnpaw is a sweet loving cat,who needs to learn to be tough. shes nice and loves to play, she also has a toyboyish side. she is a little mean to cats that make fun off her eye but she wont fight about it. dawnpaw also loves to be alone but needs to be in a clan for the fact she can't be totally alone. she resents other female cats and shows a more flirty side as she get older.

Birth: clan born

History:dawnpaws mom was mean and one sided cat. she really only want a boys and though a daughter was evil.so when she had Dawnpaw she left her to die near the wind clan. but the wind clan warriors found her while they were hunting so she vowed to stay in the wind clan.And she has never been good at hunting but she can at least catch something.



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Re: a new cat by dani :)

Post by Snigger on October 18th 2011, 3:51 pm

Could you please fix the periods that should be commas? It makes it hard to judge the bio.

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[19:45:24] @ OMENKIT : IKUTO IS DEAD SEXY! In a miniskirt...
[19:50:44] @ Rook ϟ : I bet I look better than he does in a miniskirt. :I
[19:51:09] @ Rook ϟ : People compliment me whenever I wear my miniskirt to school u_u
[19:51:30] @ Rook ϟ : And when I tie my hair in a ponytail.
[19:51:56] @ Rook ϟ : And when I do the caramelldansen.
[19:52:10] @ Rook ϟ : And stuff balloons in my shirt to make it look like I got big boobs.
[19:52:13] Jaki : [Thou whose name shalt not be spoketh] does it all better XP
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Re: a new cat by dani :)

Post by ~dani-san~ on October 21st 2011, 2:18 am

kinda fixed. i know i probably need more history but i can not think of anything else.
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Re: a new cat by dani :)

Post by Snigger on October 21st 2011, 7:13 am

Even though you're minimum is three sentences for history, they're supposed to be detailed. . .

Maybe you could add something about her mother. Like if she ran away, steers clears of Dawn, or etc. Just making a suggestion to help your bio

Oh, and can you maybe turn the pics in your signature into links on their names? The pictures are kinda big >->

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THE SNIGNATURE

[19:45:24] @ OMENKIT : IKUTO IS DEAD SEXY! In a miniskirt...
[19:50:44] @ Rook ϟ : I bet I look better than he does in a miniskirt. :I
[19:51:09] @ Rook ϟ : People compliment me whenever I wear my miniskirt to school u_u
[19:51:30] @ Rook ϟ : And when I tie my hair in a ponytail.
[19:51:56] @ Rook ϟ : And when I do the caramelldansen.
[19:52:10] @ Rook ϟ : And stuff balloons in my shirt to make it look like I got big boobs.
[19:52:13] Jaki : [Thou whose name shalt not be spoketh] does it all better XP
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Re: a new cat by dani :)

Post by ~dani-san~ on October 21st 2011, 9:59 am

i am i just noticed that lol
ok imma fix it
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Re: a new cat by dani :)

Post by Snigger on October 21st 2011, 3:57 pm

"she really only want a boys and though a daughter was evil"

Can you make sense of that please? D:

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[19:45:24] @ OMENKIT : IKUTO IS DEAD SEXY! In a miniskirt...
[19:50:44] @ Rook ϟ : I bet I look better than he does in a miniskirt. :I
[19:51:09] @ Rook ϟ : People compliment me whenever I wear my miniskirt to school u_u
[19:51:30] @ Rook ϟ : And when I tie my hair in a ponytail.
[19:51:56] @ Rook ϟ : And when I do the caramelldansen.
[19:52:10] @ Rook ϟ : And stuff balloons in my shirt to make it look like I got big boobs.
[19:52:13] Jaki : [Thou whose name shalt not be spoketh] does it all better XP
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Re: a new cat by dani :)

Post by ~dani-san~ on October 23rd 2011, 6:36 pm

i meant that her mom only wanted a boy not a girl
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Re: a new cat by dani :)

Post by Snigger on October 24th 2011, 6:41 am

Approved

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[19:45:24] @ OMENKIT : IKUTO IS DEAD SEXY! In a miniskirt...
[19:50:44] @ Rook ϟ : I bet I look better than he does in a miniskirt. :I
[19:51:09] @ Rook ϟ : People compliment me whenever I wear my miniskirt to school u_u
[19:51:30] @ Rook ϟ : And when I tie my hair in a ponytail.
[19:51:56] @ Rook ϟ : And when I do the caramelldansen.
[19:52:10] @ Rook ϟ : And stuff balloons in my shirt to make it look like I got big boobs.
[19:52:13] Jaki : [Thou whose name shalt not be spoketh] does it all better XP
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